Submitted by: Christine H. Butler
Christine@TheButlerWroteIt.com
520-403-8600
Project: Revolution Golf Email Project for Apprentice Position
Date: February 7, 2014
Subject Line 1:
Now you can train just like a golf pro
Subject Line 2:
Now you have access to the same training and technology as a golf pro
Ever wish you could play golf like Tiger Woods, Phil Mickelson, Adam Scott, or Steve Stricker? Well…now’s your chance.
At Revolution Golf our mission is to change the way the game is played. Currently only the pros have access to the state of the art technology and training, but we want to turn that around. Our goal is to bring the same level of elite instruction, equipment, and understanding of the game to the every day, recreational, weekend golfer…like you.
No longer will you fight inconsistency and feel embarrassed to play with your friends or the local pro. With our help, you can improve your game in a relatively short period of time. We can help you shave five strokes or more off your score if you’ll work with us. We want you to play your best golf ever!
If this is not what you’re looking for, then no problem. But if it is…then we have a program designed specifically for you.
We don’t feel it’s right for just the pros to have the big advantage of having access to the best of everything. So we’re making it available to you as well. We want to make you a part of this elite group.
Our intention is to shrink the chasm between the pros and you in terms of accessibility to the latest and greatest golf techniques and technology. That’s the number one reason we are making this inside knowledge available to you.
We are so determined to make this big change in the game that we are offering access to this program to new customers, not for the normal price of $500, but for only $50. Imagine getting the same level of instruction as the pros get for only $50. This will help us meet our mission of getting this elite training system in as many hands as we possibly can.
If after trying our system you are not getting the results you are looking for, no problem, we are offering a guarantee. The only thing we ask is that you try out what you learned from this program for two rounds of golf. That’s it.
If you are interested in improving your golf game, acquiring consistency, learning the inside scoop that is normally saved for the pros, and having access to the same level of instruction as they get, then click here for more details.
You will enjoy being treated like a pro…and better yet, you’ll enjoy playing like one.
Hit ‘em straight!
Revolution Golf